Health and social care
Assessment Draft
To whom this may concern, I am writing in response to your magazine article “Teenagers should listen more!” I have felt the need to reply due to the custody of my views and experience. I am writing this letter to you to hopefully change your views and shine a better light to our future generation which is our very own, teenagers.
Firstly, I’d like to clarify that teenagers are invariably pressured in to making sure they stay well aware from the dangers that the world can come to. Also, adults should be constantly reminded of the pressure that teenagers face due to GCSE’s constructing their whole future could be very intimidating, keeping in mind that adults in the 20th century couldn’t find the value of ‘x’ and don’t have a clue about Pythagoras Theorem, yet they still push their teenage daughters/sons to do their very best at any high achievement standard.
Nonetheless, in your article you have declared that teenagers do some foolish things. I truly understand that teenagers makes some thoughtless mistakes and can’t yet think straight however I can assure money takes a huge part in all of the problems the world faces till this very day with the cause of poverty and economically harassed parents who have to work late nights to pay for new school uniforms that eternally need replacing as teenagers mature and hit puberty, without teenagers realizing it can lead them to serious misconceptions and making bad decisions at the heat of the moment.
Furthermore, you have also claimed that some teenagers put more thought into choosing a pair of trainers than they do into selecting their option subjects at school. However, many students focus on their studies and attend afterschool clubs to boost their learning and achieve their very best. In spite of this a minority of students are not concerned of their future and their education because they are not pushed to work hard enough by their teachers and adults in their community. Additionally, most adults
To whom this may concern, I am writing in response to your magazine article “Teenagers should listen more!” I have felt the need to reply due to the custody of my views and experience. I am writing this letter to you to hopefully change your views and shine a better light to our future generation which is our very own, teenagers.
Firstly, I’d like to clarify that teenagers are invariably pressured in to making sure they stay well aware from the dangers that the world can come to. Also, adults should be constantly reminded of the pressure that teenagers face due to GCSE’s constructing their whole future could be very intimidating, keeping in mind that adults in the 20th century couldn’t find the value of ‘x’ and don’t have a clue about Pythagoras Theorem, yet they still push their teenage daughters/sons to do their very best at any high achievement standard.
Nonetheless, in your article you have declared that teenagers do some foolish things. I truly understand that teenagers makes some thoughtless mistakes and can’t yet think straight however I can assure money takes a huge part in all of the problems the world faces till this very day with the cause of poverty and economically harassed parents who have to work late nights to pay for new school uniforms that eternally need replacing as teenagers mature and hit puberty, without teenagers realizing it can lead them to serious misconceptions and making bad decisions at the heat of the moment.
Furthermore, you have also claimed that some teenagers put more thought into choosing a pair of trainers than they do into selecting their option subjects at school. However, many students focus on their studies and attend afterschool clubs to boost their learning and achieve their very best. In spite of this a minority of students are not concerned of their future and their education because they are not pushed to work hard enough by their teachers and adults in their community. Additionally, most adults